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This week, the black moment...or one of them anyway!
He’d
first known he was falling in love with her when he realized she made him feel
normal—not a troll, but just a regular being. The fall was completed when he
realized she made him feel not just normal but like a normal man. It was something he’d never
experienced before—never expected to experience. Now he’d come to crave it more
than food, than water. The knowledge that she saw him, liked him, desired him,
made him complete.
And
he was on the verge of losing her, the end of this ideal moment of life coming
at him as swiftly as the edge of the meadow and the cliff beyond.
Ooh - this is incredibly powerful. What a thought-provoking final sentence. Very impressive.
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