Saturday, September 10, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday!

Yeah! Time for Six Sentence Sunday once again and, since this week saw the release of Beyond Prudence, here’s another snippet to whet your appetite! Thanks once more to the ladies of SSS and make sure to drop by and check out the other participants.

“I dream,” he continued, his voice a low rasp of desire, “of you above me, taking me, your hair a curtain between us and the world.”
The air stilled in her throat, her entire body trembling at the thought of having him beneath her, at her mercy.
“Would…?” She paused, licked her suddenly dry lips, and tried once more to speak. “Would you truly like that?”
Will shuddered, nodded, eyes flashing in that special way she’d come to recognize and, in one of the greatest understatements of her entire life, Prudence whispered in return, “I think I would like that too.”

14 comments:

  1. Holy Mackerel, Vivien! You're either on the West Coast or up real late. Thanks for the comment and I'm heading over to yours :)

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  2. I love Will and Prudence. So glad they're released out there. :)

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  3. Nice! I like knowing a bit more - great job

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  4. “I dream of you above me, taking me, your hair a curtain between us and the world.”

    Hello! Gonna make hubby memorize that one!!! Woot!

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  5. "... one of the greatest understatements of her life..."
    Loved this line! Great six!
    Amy Durham

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  6. I'm in California, and you're in my Google Reader, so I popped over as soon as it showed up! :)

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  7. Ah, I love that last line especially.

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  8. Awesome six! Very nicely done. I could feel the sexual tension and sexual charge between the characters.

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  9. Thanks for dropping by everyone! I'm enjoying SSS sooo much. Sunday needs a few more hours though!

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  10. Beautifully done! I can't wait to read this! :)

    ~Xakara
    PsiCorps #3

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  11. Great dialog and imagery. Very classy yet steamy!

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